dianeseattle
Member
How about writing haiku that relate to your weight loss struggle and success?
In Japan they have very specific rules for how to write a haiku.
The season gives way.
Winter lays down her mantle,
As spring bursts to life
On a withered branch
A crow has alighted:
Nightfall in autumn.
And here's one from me, an Ode to post op diarrhea:
brown commode water
unfamiliar season brings
an unwelcome guest
So are you game? I know not everyone will be excited about this and many probably do not like haiku but I love it.
In Japan they have very specific rules for how to write a haiku.
- There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables.
- The first line is 5 syllables.
- The second line is 7 syllables.
- The third line is 5 syllables like the first.
- Punctuation and capitalization are up to the poet, and need not follow the rigid rules used in structuring sentences.
- A haiku does not have to rhyme, in fact usually it does not rhyme at all.
- It can include the repetition of words or sounds
- Traditional haiku requires including 1) an observation or conclusion, and 2) a season of the year and 3) a spoken or unspoken color.
The season gives way.
Winter lays down her mantle,
As spring bursts to life
On a withered branch
A crow has alighted:
Nightfall in autumn.
And here's one from me, an Ode to post op diarrhea:
brown commode water
unfamiliar season brings
an unwelcome guest
So are you game? I know not everyone will be excited about this and many probably do not like haiku but I love it.